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IndigosMama
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Anyone wanna do a fun little excercise? Try it and post the results!

fold a piece of paper in half lengthwise. On one side write a list of completely random nouns (people, places, things, or ideas--Rome, pillow, bathtub, etc..) and then on the other side, think of a role or profession and write a list of verbs (actions words--run, bite, fall, etc..) that go along with that profession (say you pick "teacher", your verbs might be "lecture," "write," "grade," "assign," etc..)

Then pick some nouns and pair them with verbs you wouldn't have otherwise thought to (like, Rome assigned me the task of dreaming/The embroidered pillow lectured my sleeping ear..."

Here's mine:

The bathtub sucked the oil from my skin
as I waited for you
While the faucet pounded me with warm white-water
that teased my dancing toes
And yesterday's coffee mug sighed at the sink,
the steam reminding her of
hot breath, wet lips, and
morning's thirsty mouthing.

I deviated from just using verbs and sometimes used related adjectives instead. Anyone wanna give it a try?

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no one wants to try? I hope I didn't creep you guys out with my kinda pervy poem............

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i was going to but havent gotten the chance yet.

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SkyKid45 wrote:
i was going to but havent gotten the chance yet.

Yeah, me too. I think yours sounds really cool, btw.

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I don't know if I did it right, well I did everything you said, but I don't know if its long enough or something :oops: It was really fun though I'm gonna try another one since this one was just kinda..ehh..
btw i loved your poem and its ...pervyness..haha

His smile tickled my eyes
promising me tomorrow
While our lips danced in paradise
teasing my whispered dreams
and reminding my heart of time

haha! I kinda got bored of that one though so I'm onto another one :shock:

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Do you know of any other fun things like that to do?

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that was great! I'm glad you did it! I bet I know of some other things...

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Think of any? haha sorry I'm antsy... I'm bored.