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Im writing an essay titled Teen Pregnancy: Misconception, and Discrimination. I have a couple of paragraphs, but I still need some ideas as to what to put in my paper. So far I ahve labels we receive as teen parents, the misconception that every teen parent drops out of school, sleeps around etc, and personal experiences (such as going to school while pregnant) what else should I add. thanks girls

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my essay... suggestions please

you should add success stories of teen parents.

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my essay... suggestions please

you should write about girlmom, and how as a community we empower each other.
also, you should totally chekc out the "EMPOWER" zine if you haven't already.

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good luck with your essay! what class is it for?

i wrote a paper about teen pregnancy a long while back and put it up at http://www.angelfire.com/ut/indigo/wspaper.html
hopefully there's something in there that will help or inspire you. there's stuff i would change in it now, and i wrote it pretty fast so it's definitely not my best work, but i think there's some decent stuff in there. :)

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its for my english/writing class, and thats the topic i picked, cuz...well who better to write about it then someone who knows abpout it right? thanks for the suggestions girls...ill post it when im done